We should do it together. If you are on discord that would be good to talk there
Hey I have done act 2 so please give me so addional changes to the story line!
A brief moment after the 5 entered the portal shows that the scientist chicken talking to a boss chicken about the villain & they are trying to create a new egg cannon by the name of egg cannon cannonade cannonade at the center of the milky way. The scientist explains to the boss how this cannon works. Then they both go to eat & the camera looks towards the cannon that the chickens are building. Then the portal takes the 5 to the edge galaxy more than 100,000 light years away. After the portal took them there the 5 realised that they have no idea or plan from the commander. Then the camera goes to the commander who is trying to contact them but it would take 100 minutes to get a voice message back & fourth. The hero is trying to figure out something & before he does another chicken attack comes in with fireball & space probe chickens. But after 3 minutes the attack ended with all chickens getting killed. Then the heroine finds a paper to the chickens temporary place where chickens make the space probes & shows the plan to the 4 & makes on the move. A brief moment shows the chickens working on the cannonade & experimenting its lasers which it fails. Then the camera goes to the earth where scientist are figuring it out how to get communications fast from the 5. The 5 faces minor chicken attacks in different variations for 5 minutes & when they enter a star system they encountered a boss, a massive chicken in a military uniform throwing grenades & knifes at them. Then they get a message from their commander on where they are & the hero replies that he does not know how far. After some time the 5 defeats in boss & saves the star system with no injuries. The 2 idiots find a space burger & wanted to eat but they got rejected by the hero , heroine & co hero. A brief moment shows the chicken experimenting the cannonade with the second cannon deployment which it works. The 5 goes on the move just talking about themselves about 3 minutes while the idiots just clashes with each other but along the way they noticed some feathers. Then the camera goes to the guardian getting worried about his co hero brother which the commander confronted him. Then the camera goes to the 5 & they were confused on the feathers but the hero realised that it was the feather brain who is spewing out the feathers so he quickly tells them to the 4 but then a feather struct on the co hero & he was badly hurt, then the chickens came attacking so the 5 makes on the move. After going through for 5 minutes. During that they get a message from their commander that they were 85,000 light years away which shocked the 5 & after messaging the commander they finally encountered the feather brain. After 3 minutes of attacks from her she finally exploded & gets killed. While on the way they encountered a wormhole so they move fast to reach it & they did so.
@Flame_Spacecraft For the entire move lets do 6 acts. first 3 is before intermission which is 1 hour & the last 3 is after the intermission which is 1 hour
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@windows_95_1 should I add more to what you have written?
I got some idea I will work on act2 at this time say guys what do you think about i will see it and might add it
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if there is any mistake in it then fix it
It needs more details on how the battle was against the feather brain and chicken in military uniform.
Guys have you ever played any of the versions of chicken invaders and think âWhy are the chickens invading us?â. I think we should add this to our story somewhere in the last act then the chicken boss explains why they want to take over the galaxy.
Give me the link to your server so that we can chat.
They are evil like aliens
Aliens want to invade our world
Just like what humans do
Humans want to take after humans for their purposes
I think I would like the movie maker
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So they are just evil?
I think they need a back story. I will write about their back story in a few ours (about 2-4 hours)
You guys can continue with the acts.
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IMO, For me Iâd prefer Action, Drama instead
backstory maybe in the sequel?
We did votes for that
I donât think they need backstory but ok if you guys want backstory I might make votes for it
Do you want a backstory?
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backstory for like 5 minutes maybe in like when hero , heroine & co hero are talking were the chickens came from
Try this.
(This scene happened when travelling in the wormhole)
Hero: Guys have you ever wondered where the chickens came from and why they are so evil?
Co-Hero: Did you read my mind? I was about to talk about that. Anyways, as a kid I was really curious, I would go to libraries grab all the books about galactic history and read all can, but I got board. But luckily my dad used visit once a month because he was recruit of the UHF so he brought a book about galactic history just for me, he told me to have this book for myself only no one is aloud to read it. But there was something weird.
(but before you continue reading use this link it will lead to a song listen as you read for more vibe. Ctrl + click to use link)
It was completely different from what we were tough in school. When I started reading the book I was amazed, it said there was a huge galaxy about ten times our own any possible lifeforms dwelled there about 100 species, it was beautiful, the highest tech ever to exist even better than what we use now, nuclear power available and safe to use, powerful weapons like Mjolnir capable of destroying a solar system if at full charge , all species lived in harmony, but there was one species which was used as slaves THE CHICKENS. These creatures were abused all because they had no resources in the entire galaxy and they had no history because of these creatures the leaders of the galaxy (which are not humans) decided to create a division between them and chickens because they feared what they may become. The chickens were invaded their planet was destroyed, and they were banned to the edges of the galaxy, some were used as slaves. The humans decided to leave the galaxy to a different one because they could not live in such a world, but their new galaxy had only one life supporting planet Earth. The next ten pages was all about earth so I skipped, and ended up in a page filled with war, war and war, the chickens held a rebellion against the entire galaxy, they stole technology build giant ships and managed to conquer the planet that hosted the Mjolnir, they destroyed the species with most technology first. They succeeded but there was one species left us so they built multiple battle ships bigger than moons called the Henterprize they used these to destroy all other species not even a single one survived. Then it was time for the hunt for humans, they eventually found us, but by the time they got to earth humans were already aware because of a satellite they left at the leadersâ base. The UHF was already formed. Thatâs all I can tell you guys about chickens.
Donât let your guard down we have arrived at our destination.
Seems complicated
But I prefer the part where humans were experiencing on chickens
But edit the last part humans didnât leave the galaxy they managed to create ci academy force that will protect the universe from chicken invasion
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Humans didnât experience on chickens it was aliens from another galaxy they failed and got invaded and their land became chickens galaxy. us humans knew these news and we created ci academy