Didn’t you vote on my script?
Bcz there was some action or something else that I like that’s why
What was your favourite part?
you put human so its sucks
So you would like it without humans? Then who would be the CI leader you guys were talking about? The old usual ships? Ships talking un space, without a base, just talking in space. (No offence)
the ships should be alive themselves kinda like robots & don’t like the villain
So you want the ships to be like self aware androids protecting earth? And you want the story to be all funny and no action. Even if this is turned into a movie (a funny one) no one will take it seriously.
people would 
I don’t understand you
;( bruh
people would take seriously about the movie
Imagine if you were hiring people a joker and a seriours worker who would you hire as you manager?
??? wtf are you saying
I mean no one would ever take a funny movie seriously, even I will not. Okay lets talk about Paw Patrol. This is a cartoon that letrally lets pups protect a town! Isn’t that a comedy filled cartoon. It is, so no one will not take it seriously. When I wasn’t yet a teenager I watched it for just entertainment nothing more. (I am not bragging about my childhood memories I am using them for an example). So all I am talking about is that in life if you don’t do things seriously no one, no one will ever take you serious.
CASE CLOSED, AND OF DEBATE!
its not funny. Its silly & action like 9-1-1
Oh, sorry for the misconception but you get what I meant right?
Therefore we are not talking about anything regarding my script.
k also act 1 of the script is done now its act 2
@Flame_Spacecraft Can I handle the act 2? No AI. This goes to everyone too can I handle it?
We should do it together. If you are on discord that would be good to talk there
Hey I have done act 2 so please give me so addional changes to the story line!
A brief moment after the 5 entered the portal shows that the scientist chicken talking to a boss chicken about the villain & they are trying to create a new egg cannon by the name of egg cannon cannonade cannonade at the center of the milky way. The scientist explains to the boss how this cannon works. Then they both go to eat & the camera looks towards the cannon that the chickens are building. Then the portal takes the 5 to the edge galaxy more than 100,000 light years away. After the portal took them there the 5 realised that they have no idea or plan from the commander. Then the camera goes to the commander who is trying to contact them but it would take 100 minutes to get a voice message back & fourth. The hero is trying to figure out something & before he does another chicken attack comes in with fireball & space probe chickens. But after 3 minutes the attack ended with all chickens getting killed. Then the heroine finds a paper to the chickens temporary place where chickens make the space probes & shows the plan to the 4 & makes on the move. A brief moment shows the chickens working on the cannonade & experimenting its lasers which it fails. Then the camera goes to the earth where scientist are figuring it out how to get communications fast from the 5. The 5 faces minor chicken attacks in different variations for 5 minutes & when they enter a star system they encountered a boss, a massive chicken in a military uniform throwing grenades & knifes at them. Then they get a message from their commander on where they are & the hero replies that he does not know how far. After some time the 5 defeats in boss & saves the star system with no injuries. The 2 idiots find a space burger & wanted to eat but they got rejected by the hero , heroine & co hero. A brief moment shows the chicken experimenting the cannonade with the second cannon deployment which it works. The 5 goes on the move just talking about themselves about 3 minutes while the idiots just clashes with each other but along the way they noticed some feathers. Then the camera goes to the guardian getting worried about his co hero brother which the commander confronted him. Then the camera goes to the 5 & they were confused on the feathers but the hero realised that it was the feather brain who is spewing out the feathers so he quickly tells them to the 4 but then a feather struct on the co hero & he was badly hurt, then the chickens came attacking so the 5 makes on the move. After going through for 5 minutes. During that they get a message from their commander that they were 85,000 light years away which shocked the 5 & after messaging the commander they finally encountered the feather brain. After 3 minutes of attacks from her she finally exploded & gets killed. While on the way they encountered a wormhole so they move fast to reach it & they did so.